Post by Gorgosaurus on Sept 9, 2012 9:03:19 GMT -5
After tour profile is accepted, post a Writing Sample for your characters here. Here's an actual Writing Smaple which is made by myself:
Rain plummeted down on Venom and Toxic as they both lied down besided each other, sleeping soundly, despite the rain that battered their bodies. Inside his blackness dream, Venom woke up to the sound of Ivanova and Benny fleeing the nest. Venom hooted and looked around. No signs of danger. Looking around, he saw that Patch and Deleen still werent here. As if a sign, Venom heard the Troodons snarling. Then a Dilo's frill shaking. More snarling. Quickly, Venom bolted up and nudged Toxic awake. Toxic, still sleepy, hooted to Venom. Venom hooted, saying that Patch and Deleen were in danger. Toxic shook his head, and snarled at the thought of the Troodons. Quickly, Venom and Toxic raced out of the clearing and faced the Troodons. Venom snarled fiercly as Toxic exposed his frill, rattling it loudly.
Not to small, almost perfect spelling, and descriptive. That's what i want to see. Have fun!!
Rain plummeted down on Venom and Toxic as they both lied down besided each other, sleeping soundly, despite the rain that battered their bodies. Inside his blackness dream, Venom woke up to the sound of Ivanova and Benny fleeing the nest. Venom hooted and looked around. No signs of danger. Looking around, he saw that Patch and Deleen still werent here. As if a sign, Venom heard the Troodons snarling. Then a Dilo's frill shaking. More snarling. Quickly, Venom bolted up and nudged Toxic awake. Toxic, still sleepy, hooted to Venom. Venom hooted, saying that Patch and Deleen were in danger. Toxic shook his head, and snarled at the thought of the Troodons. Quickly, Venom and Toxic raced out of the clearing and faced the Troodons. Venom snarled fiercly as Toxic exposed his frill, rattling it loudly.
Not to small, almost perfect spelling, and descriptive. That's what i want to see. Have fun!!